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| Kiorein | Feb 24 2009, 08:58 PM Post #1 |
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The Escapades of Kiorein and Pals English Essay The city of Whereverweare. I have never seen a more corrupt hive of scum and villainy. It’s a town of chaos, destruction, crime, death, crime, injustice, and some more crime. Otherwise, it’s an ordinary urban city. It’s got smoothly paved streets, sidewalks, random unimportant people constantly walking on the sidewalks, stores, food places, a Pizza Hut on every other corner, movie theatres, death camps, mafia headquarters, taco joints, and etcetera. A teenage boy marched down a street. His lavender hair swaying with every step, his happy grin attracting looks of disgust from disgruntled onlookers, and his general bright outlook on life causing uneasiness to all those around him. “Finally, I’m rich.” He remarked. “And no losers leeching off of my fortune and making my life suck. Life is good.” In his arms, he held the two orange boxes, each housing a single Pizza Hut P’zone. He wore a scarlet hooded sweatshirt, ordinary blue-jeans and sneakers. “Now, to head home and enjoy my lunch” he said. “…Why are you talking to yourself?” remarked a man. “Shut up,” snapped Kiorein. He continued walking down the road. As he turned a corner, he suddenly heard a loud, screeching whistle. He, startled, snapped around to see its source. To his surprise, it was a police officer! “Whoa!” he shouted. “Since when did you cops actually blow whistled and do cop stuff?” he said. “I’m the one asking questions, here” snapped the cop. The officer was a tall, anthropomorphic fox, wearing the typical policeman’s apparel and other ordinary human garments. “Officer Instant.” He said, flashing a badge. “Uh, right” said Kiorein. “Is there a problem, officer?” asked Kiorein. “You’ll bet there’s a problem, son” said Instant. “You’ve got yourself some contraband there, hand it over.” “C-contraband? Wh-what are you talking about?” he asked as he stared into the officer’s reflective shades. Instant pointed at the P’zone boxes. “But this is my lunch! I need food to live!” “That’s what they all say, son” said Instant. “Now, fork it over.” Kiorein, saddened, hesitantly held out the pair of boxes over to the fox-cop. Suddenly, he was interrupted as there was a huge slam next to them. Both of them turned around to see what sort of monstrosity could be looming over them. It was a huge, robotic police officer. Standing at about sixty feet, painted black with a huge gleaming badge on its torso, it loomed over them threateningly. Instead of a head, there appeared to be some sort of stairmaster exercise device. “HALT! In the future, lunch is a felony!” boomed the machine. It held its arm out as it pointed a laser cannon at them. It, then, tried to fire at Kiorein, but the laser jammed. The robot spent several frustrating moments trying to figure out what was causing the blockage.” “Augh! You’re ruining my robbery!” shouted Instant. “Get outta here!” he yelled. Kiorein looked upon this and pondered. He thought deeply for several moments. “…robbery?” he thought for a few more seconds. “Aha! You’re not a real cop!” he screamed. “I should have known from the moment I saw that cardboard badge!” Both the mechanical cop and the imposter-fox-cop-guy both stared at Kiorein for a second. “Well, you’re not getting THIS meal!” he shouted, as he made a run for it. Edited by Kiorein, Feb 24 2009, 08:59 PM.
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Feb 24 2009, 10:54 PM Post #2 |
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WHAT IS THIS!? |
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| Stairmaster | Feb 25 2009, 04:31 AM Post #3 |
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wow there goes your chance for college. |
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| Kiorein | Feb 25 2009, 10:32 AM Post #4 |
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lol what The teacher already approved the story. She more than approved it. I'm like, totally gonna get an "A" on this assignment |
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| Stairmaster | Feb 25 2009, 04:38 PM Post #5 |
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Wait since when did kio become a teenager.
Edited by Stairmaster, Feb 25 2009, 04:38 PM.
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| Kiorein | Feb 25 2009, 05:44 PM Post #6 |
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When was it applied that he wasn't |
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| Akina | Aug 14 2009, 09:20 PM Post #7 |
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i loved the story... good grammar, sentance endings, good first paragraph about the location and character description, its long, lots of action and talking, third person, overal its a wonder ful story and plot, you should continue it. I'd steal those P'zones if i had the chance... o-o |
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I Hate Everything. WOOHOO! I'm a Novice! :D | |
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| Kiorein | Aug 14 2009, 09:22 PM Post #8 |
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Actually, this is extremely short compared to the original work. http://italicforum.com/topic/688357/1/ |
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| Stairmaster | Aug 15 2009, 12:56 AM Post #9 |
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more now. |
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| Akina | Aug 15 2009, 08:34 AM Post #10 |
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*squeals* yay! more story!*hugs Kio tightly* thanks Kio! oh by the way this is my 30th post! Yay! I'm a Novice! :D |
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I Hate Everything. WOOHOO! I'm a Novice! :D | |
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Pregga Zexas
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Aug 18 2009, 11:57 AM Post #11 |
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I totally forgot how brilliant this was |
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| Stairmaster | Aug 19 2009, 05:32 PM Post #12 |
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I didn't. Lex Luthor you do realize you probably are going to be removed from the plot or your character is tottally going to become some sort of evil german instead of nazi. |
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| Kiorein | Aug 19 2009, 09:38 PM Post #13 |
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Yes also Hitler will become Johnny the Bad German |
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| Stairmaster | Aug 20 2009, 01:23 AM Post #14 |
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Make him Master D and have schnnipshly be the contra guy who shoots him. |
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