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Samurai in Space Page 13
Topic Started: Jun 12 2010, 06:53 PM (777 Views)
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FUCK YOU SWANSON WE'RE DOING IT

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Edited by Kiorein, Jun 15 2010, 08:39 AM.
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Not with this layout we're not
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go to hell
Edited by Stairmaster, Jun 12 2010, 07:12 PM.
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POSTING
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No. Get a new layot.
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Bros I;m gonna keep Stairs's and Pregga's panel, but make a new layout.

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BUT THE TRIANGLE
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You can't even imagine how much that MAKES ME SICK
also, do we really need 19 panels on one page so that all the dialogue has to be right on top of the drawings?
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Dude, the majority of the dialogue in this comic is something like "I am Samurai and you will die!" I hardly think we're going to run out of space for that.
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TOO MANY PANELS/10
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Yeah, I definitely think YOU should have an opinion on these things, Swanson, since you drew a solid-red panel that said BOOM!!! in big black letters on page 3, Anubis on page 7 with a bunch of blank space, Kenny G on page 12, and NOTHING ELSE EVER.
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Yeah I kinda wanna get rid of the kenny g panel, that is totally out of perspective and doesn't fit in with anything established within the samurai universe
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ALSO THE PANEL DOESN'T MAKE VERY MUCH SENSE.

DOES ELVIS GET PERTUBED WHEN PEOPLE PLAY ROCK MUSIC? NO.

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THERE I BROUGHT BACK THE FUCKING TRIANGLE.

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KIO THAT'S BEAUTIFUL SOMEONE DO A PANEL SO I CAN DO A PANEL
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Yeah I did kinda pack the panels in there. I guess Ill call next

Also the ambiguity of panels 10 and 11 bug me. The bridge over the triangle makes it feel like it should read it in the way stair meant for it too, rather than before where it makes more sense for the to be panel 11 and the one to the right to be 12.

Any objections?

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YOU ARE A GOD AMONG MEN
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STOP MAKING REVISIONS AND JUST POST A PANEL ALREADY
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HEY GUYS I HAVE AN IDEA FOR A NEW PANEL LAYOUT.
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